Gurdev Chauhan
Not very long in the past, girls used to write poetry on the sly hiding it from their parents and the public. In many Muslim-dominated cultures this practice still prevails. News of young girls, expressing love in poetry or in love letters being done to death in countries like Afghanistan still fills newspapers columns. The picture is not very different even now in some parts of India, although the situation is not so bad. But whatever be the land or gender, and whatever be the consequences, the human heart cannot stop beating with love or beating for love. Poetry usually carries verbal expressions of pangs, moans, groans, bouts of ecstasies or of depression which form the usual template of women and men in love or suffering requited love.
As to the current scene of women’s poetry, we see that women, of late, are coming to dominate the poetic space, for poetry is like second skin to most of those in love or those jilted in love. More so, poetry lends immediacy to matters of the heart.
It is heartening to see that a young Punjabi girl,Rupi Kaur, has stolen the scene worldwide, with her self-published book Milk and Honey(2014) which when later published by Andrews McNeil Publishing sold well over a million copies
Rupi Kaur says in one her interviews,“I want to put words to feelings we have trouble putting into words.” And at another place she says,“Like the breath before the kiss, I want to make the mundane beautiful.”
The current scenario of Punjabi poetry written by women looks bright with so many young and mature womenpoets writing. Fifty years back, it was not so. We had only Amrita Pritam. Born and raised in the Pakistani side of undivided Punjab, she was only28 when she came over to reside in Dehradunand afterwards in New Delhi. Her poem ‘Today I call upon Waris Shah’ is considered the most powerful poetic take on the brutal killings of innocent people on both sides of the border. In that poem, she had invoked the legendary balladeer, Waris Shahto pen the sufferings of lakhs of daughters so eloquently as he had donewith the agony of Heer on her separation from her lover, Ranjha. This poem published right after the partitionhad instantly caught peoples’ imagination all over India and had made Amrita Pritam famous overnight. Although she has written several best-selling novels like Pinjar which went on to become a very successful movie on the theme of partition, but her popularity rests primarily on her breaking the traditional grounds of thinking and living. With her book, Kagaz te Canvas, she became the first woman poet to write and popularize free verse in Punjabi.
After Amrita, the gap was filled to some extent by Manjit Tiwana who brought new sensibility and language to poetry giving expression to the superfluous and flimsy natureof love ofyoung Punjabi city bred girls so finely expressed in her poem, Girls, given below showing how theycome out of their age-old groovesfrolicking and merrymaking with their new-found freedom and empowerment.Her poetry foreshadows irony and devises suitable words-weapons to combat the age old traditional modes of living and thinking. It is first time the girls are learning to lead and enjoy life openly and on their own terms.With satire inbuilt in her poems, her book, Unidra Waratman for which she was awarded the Sahitya Academy Award, portrayed a funny but grim picture of the tension-filled, restless modern way of life.
Girls:
Some girls are long route buses
who do not take short route passengers
Some girls are Banarsi sarees
looking at whom even once, bores you
Some girls are golden framed photos
which may adore any drawing room
Some girls are lyrics
they get more amiable with every read
Some are westerly winds
who walk away speechless
quivering the cords of your heart
Some girls are butterflies
who for some young passion of theirs’s
end up imprisoned in the pages of years
Some girls are fledgling sandal trees
who muster the guts of taming the snakes
Some girls are conscience
who demand the accounting for
wrongsdone to them
and land up hung on the cross of their bodies
Some girls are ghazals sung by Begum Akhtar
who are liked by so very few
At present so many other younger women are writing poetry although none of them, except Vaneeta, has won the coveted Sahitya Academy Award so far. Vaneeta’s poetry highlights the plight of human beings caught in the existential web of life. Her poetry israther cerebral, born of dissent or dissatisfaction with the reality and condition of life at hand. She has, indeed, brought a somber sensibility to Punjabi poetry. In her poem, Sidharath, she addresses to Gautama The Buddha to change places with Yashodra, his wife, to attain a new kind of wisdom or nirvana.
This time
You would not go for nirvana
Yashoda would do that.
She feels ill
confined in the colorful walls
of your palace
Every color of those colossal walls
for her is drab
It saddens her
This time Yashodra
will place a beautiful
flower upon your lap
Do not be afraid
You achieved so much
Maybe, you will regain this knowledge too
looking at her
disappearing with hersad steps
you will reach one more
truth that endures
What did you attain
under the bodhi tree
I don’t know
Yashodra will seek nirvana
under that tree
Surrendering the pleasures of the palace
putting a little flower
upon your lap
she will go to seek nirvana
leaving you to attain thenewborn truth
Next, we come to Nirupama Dutt. She is well-versed and self-reliant poet who writes both in English and Punjabi. When it comes to writing poems, sheinvariably takes to Punjabi, although later she usuallytrans-creates her poems in Englishfor facility of their rapid journey across languages. Making poeticmock confessions, she celebrates joys, pains and gifts of her self-won carefree mode of life. Her poems grow out of herbid to get the most out of life.Brazen courage and grit marksher poetry.More so, her poems gain an easyflow soft on our nerves. Ek Nadi Sanwli Jehi, her maiden book of poetry, is generally viewed as trend setter in Punjabi poetry. Here is her poem, Dusky Girl.
A dusky girl nurtures
dreams, all fair- complexioned
and her truth is very drab
She is born
steeped in sorrow
the colour of which you cannot name
Her sorrow borrowing
its nature from water
wells up her eyes
It wallows in the red wounds
of her dusky body
She hides her ink in lacs of symbols
of anguish wedded toher color
and gets duskier
Her dreams fly far like black geese
and bring her a morsel of warm light
A dusky girl
undergoes every fair-complexioned crime
and nurtures a hope
for a fair-complexioned child of her
A dusky girl’s dreams
are very fair-complexioned
and her truth very dark
Manjit Indira has many volumes of poetry to her credit. Her poetry is marked byexplicit lyrical intensity and womanly expression of warmth, love, care and the play oftragedy and comedy in man- woman relations. Her poetic strength lies in evoking home-grown words full of tender connotations andallusions to Punjabi folklore.
Paul Kaur has of late come to her forteexhibiting rare courage in revolt against horde of injustices strewn in life. Her poems tend toward becoming a rallying point against social ills plaguing the society and the woman. Inequalities indistribution of wealth, discriminatoryand unjusttreatment based on differences of gender, language, religion, color, race and economiccondition are themes most common to her. Love, separation, loss, bad faith, double talk, betrayal and remorse are other concerns her poems are usually built around. Existential anguish andloneliness informs her poetry no less. Gentle humor and satirelendsmarked intensity toher poems. Let us share a bit of her talent:
Khabbal
I have heard
that when I was born
someone, looking at me, had
turned his face away
and, someone, had turned his back to evade
his looking at me
As they say, the newborn child
recognizes the turban of his father
in just twenty-one days,
I had recognized the averted eyes of my father
that very moment.
I had gone accustomed
to recognize and bear
the averting of people’s eyes
from looking at me
And whenever I filled my eyes
with fury for all this
I wrote the alphabet of my ire
on their averted faces
which they never could decipher
Her Another poem,Measuring cloth for my size,seems to make light of her body size.
I once donned quite a loose garb
but I felt squeezed in it
difficult to take a wholesome breath
When he met
I cut the extra cloth off
to make to my body size
but again,
my body measurementschanged
I felt trapped
in my dress
Sometimes I feel
That I should lay hold of these
cut pieces and sew them up
with my dress
but what use this
shriveled dress would be
Now I feel I should
discard this
and donning a shawl over me
make my body transcend
mydress measurements
Sukhwinder Amrit is yet another important poet towatch. She has written many books of poetry. Her poetry mainly consists of ghazals. Rhyme and rhythm with an assortment of exquisite images bearingromantic overtoneare central to poetry.Her ghazals are rich in emotional appeal due to thesubtle turn of phrase,apt descriptions,variety of images and skillful use of figures of speech.Her ghazals ring of love, passion, tenderness of feelings and grace. Below is an example of her free verse which too is quite near to the spirit of a sonnet.
I will not depart
I will not depart
from you like this
as a pale leaf
falls off a tree branch
I will take much more time
to take my leave of you
I will keep attuned to your silence
for long
I will seethe in your frosted seasons
will flicker in your dusks
stumble like a shadow on your paths
The dust of my illusions
will fly to fill up your eyes
My feathers will keep scattering
over your voids
I will keep gasping like a wounded bird
on your branch
each drop of me
getting cleansed by you
I will take my leave
from your universe
atom by atom
I will drop from your pen
word by word
Each image of me
will throb in your memory
before I depart
will groan too much in pain
in your waters
like a fish
And then at last
taking my departure
I will hide somewhere
in some curve of your breaths
I will take longto depart
Neetu Arora, SarabjeetKaur Sohal, Bhupinder Kaur Preet, Bipan Preet, Simrat Gagan, Deep Inder, Amia Kunwar, Kana Singh, Surjit Bains, SurjeetSakhi, Rajinder Kaur, Gurminder Sidhu, Amarjit Ghuman, AmanC Singh, and Taran Gujralare other women poets who have produced an encouraging body of work. All are well-known in the Punjabi literary circles. Almost all of them have published more than one or two of theirbooks of poetry recently. Rafugar by Bipan Preet,Ithe Hi Kitey by Neetu Arora and Khataas by Deep Inder have just arrived.Here are poems by Simrat Gagan, Neetu Arora, Bipan Preet and Aman C. Singh.
Simrat Gagan
Pain
Pain
Kept visiting me
As a pilgrim
Visits a shrine
The waiting
Kept its journey on
Troubles kept on pacing up
The flowers kept withering
The Thirst
Kept doubling up
Wells kept drawing water
Rains kept showering
The meanings
Kept changing
Becoming spectacles,
Love
Kept expanding
Deeper earthward,
Higher, skyward
Neetu Arora
My Loss
I have abandoned
all my math books
because every time
their fixed formulae
gave the fixed answer
No desired spot
could be reached
walking my way
Everything happened
as the formula
decreed
all sum rendered
meaningless
and the solution
like an eternal truth
I came to abhor
formulae
Freed, I got mobbed by definitions
When I countered and rebutted them
they returned with too many sums, results
Now whenever I spot the answers
I cannot reach the prime sum
Devising formulae to my liking
I have lost what I had
What formula
I applied to what sum
everything turned upside down
To whatever sum
I did add or substract from
divided or multiplied
I remember not
Applying my formulas
did not yield theresultsintended
I have lost my prime sum
Now how I am to deal with the answers
I will meet you like this
By Bipan Preet
I will catch at, and wear
upon my head, the golden
rays of the sun
adorning your body.
I will drink in the atoms of your
pure breaths dancing upon your lips
and live for a while by those moments
I will close my eyes
and look upon you
with closed eyes
As one goes into deep meditation
I will roam in the realm
of each atom of your body
and would swim across the seas
of your feelings
I will melt into your rhythms
I will join in the souls
and donning the attire of spotlessness
undergo a new life
And, then, I would
scatter myself upon you
letter by letter
word by word
line by line
Whenever I would meet you
I would like to meet with you
the same way
As for poetry by Punjabi women living abroad, there is a lot of literary activity in Canada and other countries. So many Punjabi LekhakSabhas function in all the big cities in Canada. More than two dozen Punjabi Newspapers, most of them weeklies, are published in Canada, USA, England and Australia. Among women poetsin those lands, Surjit Kalsi comes at the top for the sheer number and quality of her poetry. She has done translations from and into English. She is well-versed in both. Other women poets includeHem Jyoti, NeeruAseem, Surjit Kaur, Gurmeet Panag,Sandip Dhanoa, Sandip Chauhan, Rani Nagender, Sandy Gill, Surinder Kaur, ParamjeetDeoland quite a few others. Surjit Kaurand Neeru Aseem have more than two books of poetry to their credit and they both have shown remarkable poetic talent in their work.Most ofNeeruAseem’s poems have already been translated into English and published in her book,’If’. Very creative and innovative, her poems are delightfully enigmatic for their elusiveness and depth. The poem below is redolent of herevocative poetic ease:
Homebrewed Red Wine
Home brewed red wine
A cold evening
The deck, the fire pit
Barbecue, sons, the husband
And the Polish husband wife
From neighborhood
Small talk
Mind content and at peace
And our small world
At this moment
Recreating
From ruptures
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Gurden Chauhan is the editor of the journal *South Asian Ensemble* published from Canada and India
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